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This story is not a fable
Once I had a wooden table
It was brown
©2005-2009 ~fangst
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This poem is called Fugu.

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:iconunoriginalmuse:
Read a short story called "A Family Supper" by a guy named Ishiguro.
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Beautiful. I wept. I especially like how it ends with the word "brown". It gives it a certain ring that captivates your mind to understand this table of past. Also, the words "had" and "a" sound teathered in that context. They were meant to be together, like siamese twins.(fear my similes) However, starting such a story with the word "this" was a real setback in my analysis.

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May 19, 2005
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